The little article below was published (by a company no longer in found online) back in 2009 in a response to Young’s book. While the motion picture adaptation was pretty popular back in 2017, I haven’t seen it yet. While it’s possible it could be better than the book…I just can’t bring myself to devote any more time.

I was looking forward to reading William Young’s bestseller The Shack, as I had heard positive reviews from both friends and family.  Perhaps most importantly, though, the tale is set in the beautiful Blue Mountains of northeastern Oregon, an area known as “America’s Little Switzerland.”  It’s a remote and picturesque region of pristine wilderness covering thousands of square miles and including both the Eagle Cap Wilderness and the Wallowa-Whitman National Forest.  Ever since I first ventured into the Wallowas (pronounced Wul-OW-wuhs) some years ago, the region has captured my imagination.  When I picked-up the The Shack while on vacation in Dallas, I was looking forward not only to a good read, but to rich descriptions evoking the unique imagery of this corner of the Pacific Northwest.  Unfortunately, I quickly encountered one serious theological error after another–and a surprising number of editorial errors.  The problem, however, is that one has to frequently read the book with a critical eye in order to catch the significance of many of the problems.  Sadly, there is not space to address everything I would like–from the feminine representations of God the Father to the editorial problem with narrative and perspective with regards to Mack’s recognition of the shack–there isn’t enough space to address everything.    This review will provide more than a half dozen solid reasons why it’s definitely time to tear down The Shack,  a rambling sermon in the guise of a story, and why it’s important to take a stand against the modernism so clearly evident in books like this.  

     First of all, some mistakenly categorize this book as allegorical fiction, but that genre doesn’t quite fit.  While we may passionately disagree with the author’s message, what you see is what you get; there is no hidden meaning or carefully nuanced language.  The author himself classifies the story as more along the lines of a parable or metaphor, which seems accurate enough.  For those fortunate enough to have avoided a visit to the shack, the plot is relatively simple.  Mack (Mackenzie) Phillips is a lukewarm Christian father whose young daughter Missy is kidnapped from a family camping trip to Lake Wallowa.  This takes place four years before the story begins.  

After the kidnapping, her father stays behind and works with law enforcement in an effort to locate Missy.  Information comes to light that suggests that she has been kidnapped by a serial killer, and a tip sends Mack and the searchers speeding to a remote shack in the wilderness.  

     There, they find only blood stains and Missy’s discarded clothing.  So begins a painful period in Mack’s life that is called “The Great Sadness.”  The more Christ-centered life of Mack’s wife, Nan, is exemplified by the familiar term of “Papa” she uses when talking about God.   Fast forward those years ahead to a wintery day alone at Mack’s remote home, and he is surprised to receive a note in his mailbox from Papa.  It suggests they get together at “the shack,” which he recognizes as the same place where his daughter’s bloodied clothing was found.  He makes a visit and finds God waiting for him.  God the Father is represented as a jovial, if stereotypical, African American woman who goes by the name Papa.  While Christ is portrayed as a Jewish carpenter, and the Holy Spirit is described as Sarayu, a petite Asian woman.  Without disclosing any spoilers for those who might care, the rest of the story is made up mostly of the dialogue between  Mack and the three persons of the Trinity as they discuss elements of faith and life.

An Editorial Rat’s Nest 

      When it comes to most good fiction, an author’s theological errors can often be overlooked as we concentrate on the story itself.  In The Shack, however, the theology is too much of an integral part of the tale to be ignored.  There are also a number of less important, but still significant, editorial problems with the book.  Since editorial errors often offer a glimpse into the overall quality or credibility of a work, it’s important to give these some attention before moving on to more serious concerns.  To begin with, the author has made the mistake of creating a story solely as a mechanism to spread his brand of theology.  As a fiction writer myself, most good writers would agree that this is a serious mistake; the story should always come first. To do otherwise, does a disservice to the reader. This emphasis on the story above all else rings particularly loud and clear in a collection of essays penned by C.S. Lewis concerning the art of writing and the power of myth entitled Of Other Worlds.  In regards to the other English and editorial errors throughout The Shack, the author would do well to remember the writing rule “show, don’t tell” as well as the need to avoid the passive voice.  There is also a huge reliance in this story upon cliches, repetitive use of words like “relationship,” and dialogue that fails to ring true–all of which seriously harm the movement and originality of the narrative. 

     One of the more interesting editorial errors concerns the perspective of the narrative and the title itself. On page 61, the descriptive term “shack” is introduced by the narrator, but it’s not expressed in dialogue or other means in such a way that the main character (Mack) would have picked it up. In other words, the term is known only to the narrator and reader. When Mack receives the note referring only to the shack, how is he supposed to know which one?  Anyone who is familiar with this part of Oregon knows that there are many shacks and cabins sprinkled throughout the Blue Mountains. Granted, there is a mention in the introduction that Mack was somehow involved in writing the narrative, but this really doesn’t go far in excusing this type of sloppiness. 

Forgiveness and Free Will

     A central theme of the story is the nature of forgiveness, but there is also  confusion here.  The following sentence of dialogue, which concerns a discussion between Mack and Papa about Missy’s murderer, gives us an insight into the problem.  “When you forgive someone you certainly release them from judgement, but without true change, no real relationship can be established.”  Although, there is a degree of ambiguity in this quote, one key error is the assertion that our forgiveness in some way binds God.  By forgiving the person, Mr. Young suggests that we are removing the obligation or necessity for that individual to seek forgiveness for himself, to actually be repentant–at least in terms of judgement if not the “relationship”.  If this were true, however, it would cancel our free will.  We would be forgiven and removed from judgement without having to express any degree of remorse or repentance.  The Catechism of the Catholic Church eloquently explains the true nature of repentance in the paragraph below.

1431 Interior repentance is a radical reorientation of our whole life, a return, a conversion to God with all our heart, an end of sin, a turning away from evil, with repugnance toward the evil actions we have committed. At the same time, it entails the desire and resolution to change one’s life, with hope in God’s mercy and trust in the help of his grace. This conversion of heart is accompanied by a salutary pain and sadness which the Fathers called animi cruciatus (affliction of spirit) and compunctio cordis (repentance of heart).

     While our Lord calls us to forgive all those who do us harm (seventy times seven), our forgiveness in and of itself is not sufficient for the person who sinned against us.  There must be repentance on that person’s part, since we can’t force someone to confess his sin and repent.  It must be an act of the individual’s own free will.  I will venture, however, that our forgiveness of the person combined with prayer may go a far in becoming a tool of God’s grace within the life of the particular sinner.  And, since we are all sinners, this serves to remind us all the more of the need to “forgive those who trespass against us.”  Our very spiritual lifeblood depends on this.  After all, as we forgive, so will we be forgiven. 

Universalism

     In a book which aims to stare unblinkingly at the ugly face of pain and suffering, it’s interesting to note that neither Satan nor the devil are ever mentioned in this tale.  There is, in fact, nothing in the book which would convict us of anything.  Guilt and conscience are likewise ridiculed in favor of the vague “relationship.”  For illustration, see the concluding paragraphs of the twelfth chapter.  Incredibly, the author has the following words said by Christ.

Those who love me come from every system that exists.  They were Buddhists or Mormons, Baptists or Muslims, Democrats, Republicans, and many who don’t vote or are not part of any Sunday morning or religious institutions.  I have followers who were murderers and many who were self-righteous….  I have no desire to make them Christian, but I do want to join them in their transformation into sons and daughters of my Papa, into my brothers and sisters, into my Beloved.

Before jumping into the critique, it is important to note the answer that Mack receives when he then asks Christ whether “all roads lead to you?”  Jesus’ answer is that “most roads don’t lead anywhere.”  So, again there is an element of inconsistency or ambiguity present in the narrative.  The reason probably has more to do with the editing efforts of WindBlown Media than anything else.  I suspect that they were attempting to obfuscate things just a bit in order to deflect just this kind of criticism, but this is just my opinion.

     First of all, the passage quoted above is not referring to those, who by no fault of their own, have not heard the saving message of the Gospel; that’s a whole another issue.  The central argument of the author is indeed that there are many paths to Christ.  This, of course, runs counter to Scripture and Tradition.  “I am the way and the truth and the life. No one comes to the Father except through me.” (John 14:6)

The Deity and Most Perfect Example of Christ

     One of my strongest criticisms of this book is the manner in which it attacks the deity of Christ.  The term “hypostatic union” reminds us of the two perfect natures of Christ: the Divine and the human mysteriously present within one person.  If we dare separate the perfectly unified natures of Christ, we do so at our soul’s own peril.   As we read below from Philippians 2:5-8, He is, at once, all man and all God.

Have among yourselves the same attitude that is also yours in Christ Jesus, who, though he was in the form of God, did not regard equality with God something to be grasped.  Rather, he emptied himself, taking the form of a slave, coming in human likeness; and found human appearance, he humbled himself, becoming obedient to death, even death on a cross.

This most certainly is not the Christ of The Shack.  Instead, Mr. Young has Papa observe in chapter six that “Jesus, as a human being, had no power within himself to heal anyone.”  The author is attempting to carve up the natures of Christ, re-creating the Creator, and dismissing the deity of Christ, man and God.  

     With all the tangents and conversational digressions the author asks the poor reader to patiently endure, it’s also important to briefly note the omission of Mary. Given the “down home” nature of life in the shack some mention of Mary would seem to fit into the conversation.  After all, in Jesus’ time there was actually this idea of honoring your father and mother. Is she just a vessel to be used and then forgotten? Because, reading between the lines, that appears to be one of this author’s many misguided little messages. 

Symbolic Incongruity

     The reader too frequently encounters sections that convey unclear or contradictory meanings.  An excellent example of this kind of bewildering writing is found when Jesus washes Papa’s feet.  For purposes of contrast, let’s start with reading from John 13:2-10.

The devil had already induced Judas, son of Simon the Iscariot, to hand him over.  So, during supper, fully aware that the Father had put everything into his power and that he had come from God and was returning to God, he rose from supper and took off his outer garments.  He took a towel and tied it around his waist.  Then he poured water into a basin and began to wash the disciples’ feet and dry them with the towel around his waist.  He came to Simon Peter, who said to him, “Master, are you going to wash my feet?”  Jesus answered and said to him,  “What I am doing, you do not understand now, but you will understand later.”  Peter said to him, “You will never wash my feet.”  Jesus answered him, “Unless I wash you, you will have no inheritance with me.”  Simon Peter said to him, “Master, then not only my feet, but my hands and head as well.”  

The profound message of this passage is one of the teacher or master lowering himself to wash the feet of his disciples.  It teaches the lesson of humility and servanthood, demonstrating that the necessity to strive to place ourselves last.  The strength and symbolism of the message, however, hinges upon the juxtaposition of roles: the teacher serving his disciples.  Contrast this clear meaning with the strange and disturbing ambiguity of Mr. Young’s following prose from the opening paragraphs of the seventh chapter.

Sarayu had already started wiping the goop from the floor and cupboards, but Jesus went straight to Papa and, kneeling at her feet, began to wipe off the front of her clothes.  He worked down to her feet and gently lifted one foot at a time, which he directed into the basin where he cleaned and massaged it.  “Ooooh, that feels sooo good!” exclaimed Papa, as she continued her tasks at the counter.”

     From a deep and critical examination of any literary merit of the preceding passage, one word comes to mind: weird.  Besides coming across as just a bit creepy, the narrative loses any shadow of the meaning or depth found within John’s Gospel because it fails to describe a relationship of unequals.  Since it sheds no light on the Trinity, nor does it expand upon our knowledge of God or man, we’re left scratching our heads as to what precisely the author is attempting to convey.  One thing is for certain, however, whatever he’s trying to tell us, it’s a message best unheard.

The Trinity 

     Part of the challenge in analyzing exactly what’s wrong with The Shack in regards to its trinitarian message is that there exists a certain inconsistency within the spiritual universe created by the author.  Still, there is a definite leaning in the narrative towards Modalism or Sabellianism, which makes the heretical error of understanding the Trinity as three faces or modes of God as opposed to the three distinct persons of the Trinity.  As Catholic Answers put it, “He [a Libyan priest named Sabellius] claimed there is only one person in the Godhead, so that the Father, the Son, and the Holy Spirit are all one person with different “offices,” rather than three persons who are one being in the Godhead, as the orthodox position holds.”  It is important that we don’t confuse Modalism with an interesting theological term called communication of idioms.  As Dr. Scott Hahn points out in his wonderful book entitled Hail, Holy Queen, this rule is what allows us to confidently call Mary the Mother of God.  It’s saying that Christ’s two natures both reflect pure Truth.  Whether they are human or divine attributes, they are all dimensions of the true nature of Christ Himself.  It is by this principle that we may make statements such as God fell while carrying the cross, since God and Jesus are one. 

          One of the most telling passages concerning Modalism is found in the sixth chapter of The Shack.  

Papa didn’t answer, only looked down at their hands.  His gaze followed hers and for the first time Mack noticed the scars in her wrists, like those he now assumed Jesus also had on his.  She allowed him to tenderly touch the scars, outlines of a deep piercing, and he finally looked up again into her eyes. Tears were slowly making their way down her face, little pathways through the flour that dusted her cheeks.

In passages such as the one quoted above, Mr. Young is going further than simply blurring the lines between the persons of the Trinity; he is, I would suggest unknowingly, re-making the Trinity in the form suggested by Sabellius and his third century followers.  It may further help to briefly quote from Saint Mehtodius’ Oration on the Psalms in regards to his response to this heresy.

For the kingdom of the Father, of the Son, and of the Holy Ghost, is one, even as their substance is one and their dominion one. Whence also, with one and the same adoration, we worship the one deity in three persons, subsisting without beginning, uncreated, without end, and to which there is no successor. For neither will the Father ever cease to be the Father, nor again the Son to be the Son and King, nor the Holy Ghost to be what in substance and personality he is. For nothing of the Trinity will suffer diminution, either in respect of eternity, or of communion, or of sovereignty

     For book which rails against religious authority, it’s amusing in one sense that so much of an attempt is made at explaining the mysterious nature of The Trinity. The Trinity, after all, is not a belief made clear in a literal reading of Scripture; it is the result of Tradition and the Church. In other words, the author is indirectly attacking his own argument, since he is relying upon Tradition and the Fathers of the Church for our acceptance of the Trinity in the first place. In fact, when the author says through a character that evil is the absence of good, he is also borrowing the argument of Saint Augustine. So, he attacks the Church and Tradition, while at the same time, he becomes a Cafeteria Protestant, swiping little bits and pieces from here and there–as long as it satisfies his preconceived notions of God and “Her” nature. 

Authority and the Church

     One of the central themes of The Shack is to take, as its publisher Windblown Media puts it, “…a harsh look at how many of our religious institutions and practices have blinded people to the simple Gospel and replaced it with a religion of rules and rituals that have long ceased to reflect the Lord of Glory.”  The word relationship (which will be hard for me to read without grimacing for a while) conveys all that is important, as far as the author is concerned, between man and God.  This is another case of a piece of truth being stretched to conceal the lie.  The truth, of course, is that we should all strive for a closer relationship with our Savior.  While Catholics view conversion as a work in progress, many do point to a particular moment where there lives turned and changed course to follow Christ, a second conversion.  This pursuit of Christ entails a relationship, but that only tells part of the story.  Let’s first take a look at the author’s message as it comes into focus in these words from Papa in chapter 16.  

Papa spoke gently and reassuringly .  “Son, this is not about shaming you.  I don’t do humiliation, or guilt, or condemnation.  They don’t produce one speck of wholeness or righteousness, and that is why they were nailed into Jesus on the cross.”  

A couple chapters earlier Sarayu describes rules as only having “power to accuse.”  So, as we can see, there is no love lost between Mr. Young and any dimension or form of religious authority.  The problem is that when we dismiss authority and conscience, we are left with a vacuum.  Because what is missing is the true nature of a relationship.  That is, relationships are not without work, trials, and sacrifice.  Look at the hard effort involved in making a marriage successful, for example.  Do we say there are no rules with regards to how we treat our spouse, no expectations of conduct?  As James reminds us in James 1:22, we must be “doers of the word, and not hearers only.” 

     There are expectations and boundaries within relationships, and this is precisely what the author ignores as he attempts to mold God in the image of man.  Look at the simple message of  John 14:15.  “If you love me, you will keep my commandments.”  Another passage that reflects the reality of the eternal relationship for which we were made is 1 John 5:1-4.

Everyone who believes that Jesus is the Christ is begotten by God, and everyone who loves the Father loves also the one begotten by him.  In this way we know that we love the children of God when we love God and obey his commandments.  For the love of God is this, that we keep his commandments.  And his commandments are not burdensome, for whoever is begotten by God conquers the world.  And the victory that conquers the world is our faith.  

     As I wrote in This Rock a couple of years ago, our story of conversion or enrichment to the fullness and beauty of the Catholic Church from the Protestant tradition had a great deal to do with the authority and sure-course of the Catholic Church.  It was C.S. Lewis, for instance, who saw the dangers so clearly facing the Anglican Church and wrote his stirring essay entitled “Fern-seed and Elephants.”  We were present in the Episcopal Church at the time a practicing homosexual named Gene Robinson was ordained bishop of New Hampshire and the denomination began to weaken and break.  This is not the unity called for Christ in verses such as John 17:11.  In order to have unity and avoid heretical teaching, authority is a prerequisite.   In light of Mr. Young’s methods of biblical interpretation, a particularly good example at this point would concern sola scriptura.  Does the Holy Spirit lead different denominations in opposite directions concerning the same Bible passage?  The answer clearly is no, so this means that not everyone can be right.  This is the shepherding role of God-given authority, and this role is entirely misunderstood by Mr. Young.

     The last straw for this reviewer was a section towards the end of the book where Mr. Young essentially mocks the Eucharist (and the sixth chapter of the Gospel of John).  “Without any ritual, without ceremony, they savored the warm bread and shared the wine and laughed about the stranger moments of the weekend.”  I’d agree with Chuck Colson and James Dobson of Focus on the Family who both have come out publicly against this book and its message.   Whether you ever pick-up this book, or not, its mistakes are a reflection of the errors of our own time.  It’s modernism’s answer to the question of God.  Sadly, like The Shack, modernism has no real answer.  That’s why we must be ready to articulate our faith and discern biblical and theological errors.

Ramshackle and broken down house in the southern United States

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